Moderater Application: lab1999

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Lucas Brown, Jan 28, 2016.

  1. Lucas Brown
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    Lucas Brown Member

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    Your in-game name:
    lab1999
    Which time-zone are you in?
    Eastern time
    Which languages do you speak?
    English, ASL(American Sign Language), Part French, and Part Hebrew.
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    Yes, my friend had borrowed my laptop and downloaded hacks so I changed my password.
    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    I love to build and help others when they need it even if I do not know how to help I will still try my best to my full potential. As a Boy Scout of America I know what it means to be a leader and to help others no matter how hard or long it takes. I have lots of experience with problem solving and think I would be a great mod on any server but I have been playing Skyblock for almost 4 years now and have only dreamed of becoming a mod and mow I hope to make my dreams a reality.
    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    From 2:40pm to 9:30pm on Weekdays. Weekends when I am not helping my sister who has Cerebral palsy I will get on from 5:30 am to 10:00am and 1:30 pm to 5:30 pm.
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
    No, At school I started a Minecraft Club and Next year for my Senior year I had the superintendent allow teachers to use Skyblock to learn how to manage money and other resources.

    Contact Information:
    Email: [email protected]
    Hope to hear from you soon.

    Thank You for your time,
    Lucas Brown (lab1999)
     
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    Last edited: Jan 31, 2016
  2. Layla
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    Layla Active Member

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    -You're still a new member.
    -Grammar mistakes such as "I hope to here from you soon". You mean *hear, not here.
    -App could use more detail and information.
    -Help out.
    -I have yet to see you online the server.

    No support.
     
  3. Krissy
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    Krissy Stray Kids everywhere all around the world Administrator Discord Administrator Premium Premium

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    I will offer you a few tips
    Firstly red is a very harsh colour on the eye. If you feel the need to add colour try using a dark blue or purple.
    Second the admin does not need your email. All communication is done through the forums and this thread. I would take out your email as putting private info as such is a tad dangerous.

    Ok as for the application it is a little short and lacks a bit of detail.
    As a moderator you also should be aware that you will need to use the forums a fair bit. It would be worth mentioning what you can do for the forums.

    And you will also need to prove your claims. Be active and helpful in game, and the forums.

    For now I will hold my support or no support until i see changes.
     
  4. gummibear560
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    gummibear560 Well-Known Member

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    Just a question, why does sign language on a game where there is no FaceCam or anything. Anyway, you are new and I would like you to also use what server you are on/applying for.
     
  5. chrix32
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    chrix32 Active Member

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    First of all, fix your title to suggest more professional work. No support for now, Need to see you in game
     
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    chrix32 Active Member

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    Also, NS for these reasons
     
  7. Lucas Brown
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    Lucas Brown Member

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    I know I am just very proud to know Sign Language anyway thank you everyone who gave me suggestions. I will try to improve.
     
  8. Bossgamer
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    Bossgamer Super Moderator Super Moderator

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    Reasons stated above ^^
    No Support.

    Good Luck!
     
  9. Myrmidous
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    Myrmidous Well-Known Member Premium

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    I had to read "Cinderella" three times to get Myrmdaughter to sleep so I could check applications. By the third read-through all of the mice were on the run from the law, Cinderella loved leather high heel shoes and the prince wore sequin pants to the ball.

    This application better be worth the read. Let's do this.

    Nice to meet you sir. Have you read Hugh Howey's "Wool"? Your name features in it a few times.

    Belly flop on the second question, sir. Ouch. Which "Eastern"? Eastern Australian Time? Eastern Russian Time? Eastern Standard Time? I'm going to assume you are 'Murican, we seem to just believe the rest of the world follows our time zone names. Correct section to remove confusion.

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    I will never again see someone shouting "ASL?" online without laughing. You have literally made my night, sir. Thank you. I'm not sure what possible use sign language has for Minecraft but now I'm picturing Steve frantically waving his arms at someone and..

    ..oh oh my God.. can't breathe...

    All my +1s, right here. That was amazing. I am 100% supporting this application from this point forward, do not change anything in this section. This is perfect just the way it is, sir.

    Your friend downloaded cheats and then forced you to use them? What a horrible friend. You should get rid of him, but then you wouldn't have a mirror in the house--tough decision.

    This is shaping up to be my favorite application of the week. PROCEED.

    #LucasBrown2016

    I'd vote for you sir. Anything to avoid Donald Trump, honestly.

    You know what they say: Mow Mod, Mow Problems.

    Enjoying the confidence on your "I would be a good Mod for any server"--nicely put. Correct your run-on sentence problem (and that hilarious spelling error) and this would be a solid section. Keep it up sir.

    That "sister has cerebral palsy" feels like you forced it into the middle of explaining your schedule. If you're going to drop a TMI like that you need to do it in the beginning or the end of the statement. For example:
    "When I'm not at physical therapy learning to walk again I should be online about 5 hours a day."
    "I'll be available from noon to four on every day except Sunday. That's my Alcoholics Anonymous meeting."
    "Unless my Clozaril prescription expires I'll be online (and happy!) until about 5 every day."

    I'm very sorry to hear about your sister. Too much information and remove it from your online gaming schedule, sir. We don't need to know why you're not available.

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    You must be the smoothest talker to ever live.

    You convinced an actual, government-backed school administration to accept an official Minecraft Club?? How is this done??

    But then because you're apparently the second coming of Jordan Belfort you got them to structure an entire curriculum around teaching the economic model of SkyBlock.

    Look, I'm not calling "bullshit" here sir. But I need to borrow you for like... ten minutes... to talk my wife into letting me buy a new truck. DO IT FOR ME. I WILL LOVE YOU.

    Forget "Moderator Experience", Lucas could talk a griefer into quitting Minecraft and joining a homeless charity.

    Remove this. You'll be contacted in-game or on the forums. Putting a personal email address on a forum is requesting the entire world to mess with you sir.

    Also: Comcast. I am so sorry for you.

    Thank you, sir. This was quite a pleasant read. Good luck with your application.

    Support Status: 100%
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  10. Lucas Brown
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    Lucas Brown Member

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    Thanks for the support.
     
  11. Nikoshka
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    Nikoshka Well-Known Member

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    No support
    Will state reasons later.
     
  12. Holly
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    Holly Active Member

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    No support for now sorry. I would like to see more of you in game and helping. You are also too new to the forums and if you got promoted you would need to moderate on the server and website. Good luck
     
  13. Lucas Brown
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    Ok Sorry I have not been on the forums for awhile I was trying to pass Kidney Stones again those things hurt.:inpain::inpain:
     
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  14. chrix32
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    O GOD!
     
  15. gummibear560
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  16. Esdeath
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    Esdeath Active Member

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    Ik;r
    No support.
    Add more info.
    Never heard about you.
    Can't sayuch more, but if I judge you by your application, you're not ready yet.
    TMI LOOOOOOL
     
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