Hey I would love to be a MOD for the server

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by ManilPlaysSkyblock, Feb 20, 2016.

  1. ManilPlaysSkyblock
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    HEY MY NAME IS MANIL IGN ManilPlaysGames
    I used to have a small server with my friend, His name is Squimbles
    Anyway I learned a lot from that server especially the commands. And I think I would be quite good at helping others. Also I wont promise I will be on
    24/7 But I will try my best. I wont use these permissions to my advantage, but to an advantage to gain popularity for the Server!
    Thank you and I hope you consider my application,

    Also I recommend you should turn Adrian_Monk_ to a SMOD or an Admin as he helps everyone to the best ability he can.
    I also recommend
    Squimbles and Levatek to become a MOD as they are also very helpful.
    Thank You Again!
     

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    REPOST FROM EARLIER THREAD




    Your in-game name: ManilPlaysGames
    Which timezone are you in? GMT (Greenwich Mean Time)
    No UTC/GMT offset

    Which languages do you speak? English
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?) Nope
    Why do you think you should be a mod? I have experience from owning another Server. I could help alot of people
    How long can you be active on the server every day? Maybe 1 hour or more
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator? Well as an Owner
     
  3. corn doggo
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    No support.
    -Too much hard to see color
    -Never seen helping out
    -New member on the forums
    -Not active (timezones?)
    Also,
    Adrian is probably never going to be a admin (not trying to be rude, just admin is nearly impossible to get)
    And if you want your friends to be Mod, they have to apply also.

    Tagging the master of Mod applications:
    Myrmidous
     
  4. (NS)
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    Please extend on the points of why you would like to be mod, you are a new member so lose the tag and then please reapply, no support.
     
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    Myrmidous I hear you give the most savage reviews.
     
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    no i give better ones
     
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    Sorry Halzii I believe you have forgotten you quotation marks. :p
     
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    what
     
  9. Holly
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    The colour hurts.
     
  10. Optimistic
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    Your in-game name:
    Which timezone are you in?
    Which languages do you speak?
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?

    Follow the template.
    Also you should add colors and more details.

    Good Luck :D
     
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    WalrusSummon.jpg
    •glances at post• I'm going to need all of the drinks for this one.

    I have never seen an application with a two-part "cliffhanger". I'm both impressed and thoroughly amused, let's give this a reading. +1 immediately for creative formatting.

    Let's get started, looking forward to this.
    NICE TO MEET YOU. Everyone knows Caps Lock is how you turn on cruise control for "Cool" but you may want to tone this down a bit sir.

    Did you kill it...? Not accusing, just asking sir. Will Squimbles be joining us at a later time?

    Was this the rough draft of your application? You've basically written out the answers to the template questions in "story form", which is rather interesting.

    I would read "Popular Mods" magazine. Is CypriotMerks the centerfold? No reason, just curious.

    You may need to re-write this sentence, it sounds a lot like you're saying you want to get Moderator so you can be more popular on the server. Or maybe not, unclear wording.

    Why wasn't I invited to the fan club, Adrian_Monk_ ? #CutsDeep

    Also I find it kind of amusing that you've spent more time mentioning others than you put into your own application, sir.

    BUT WAIT! HOLD ON FANS, THERE'S MORE.
    DragonBallZ.jpg

    THIS IS MY TRUE APPLICATION!

    Did you charge up the spirit bomb??

    Nice to meet you, MPG.

    Correctly answered, +1. Good job sir.

    Aside from some odd capitalization choices I haven't had a single thing to say about your English so far. That's a refreshing change, well done and +1.

    Excellent job, keep it up.

    Picture a starving hyena staring at a crippled pig. This part of the Mod template is literally the only reason I enjoy reading these.

    ...and now I am more disappointed than Donald Trump at a hair salon. #MissedYourChance

    Hold up there, Fibbing Forknut. Your application is smaller than a politician's conscience on election day--if you scroll up about .6 of the page you might remember promising to try and be online 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Maybe revise this portion so you're not contradicting yourself sir.

    ...AND? You didn't finish your senten-

    OHHHHH. Nice!! You put a second cliffhanger on your application. Much respect, I'll wait for tomorrow so you can reveal the rest of the application. #WellPlayed

    I am very much looking forward to seeing the rest of this application, sir. I like how you've separated it out and made everyone think they've already seen the whole thing. This is a rather impressive display of showmanship, you definitely have me putting a "Watch" on this thread in case you follow up.

    Word of warning: After a cliffhanger like that you better be ready to throw down a ton of details on this application. I'd recommend a lot more detail in your "Why Should I Be A Mod" portion and definitely some rewrites on that weird preamble you have going on.

    Support Status: See You Next Time, On "Mod Review"!
     
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    - Extend your reason on why you should be a moderator. If you need help, look at accepted applications. (Don't copy them though.)
    - New to the forums.
    - Never seen in-game. (timezones?)
    - Never seen on forums. (timezones?)
    - The color hurts, tone it down a bit, please.
    - Use the edit button rather than just replying to your own application with an edited version of it.
    - You show no maturity out of the little I've known about you with this application.
    - You'd need to be more active in order to be a successful moderator.

    No support.
    Good luck. :heart:
     
  13. SkiCen
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    Nope

    This looks like it took .2 seconds to type my friend. ^ reasons stated above
     
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    No support, reasons stated above.
     
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    Reasons stated above.
    I suggest using the edit button.
     
  16. BriPlaysMC
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    No support

    ~Use right template-->Mod Application template - Read before posting
    ~New to forums.(did you join just to apply for mod?)
    ~Never seen you online
    ~tone down the colors a bit, they hurt my eyes.
    ~you need to add way more detail

    Please take the advice given to you, Good Luck!
     
  17. ManilPlaysSkyblock
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    Hello everyone. I decided not to take part any more but I might re consider another time when i'm more experienced. Thanks for all the advise, even if it was a bit (brutal) xD
     
  18. Holly
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    Advice*
     
  19. Myrmwife
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    Would you like this thread locked till you need it?
     
  20. ManilPlaysSkyblock
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    Hmm, Thanks for the offer but I would like to have it unlocked so I could receive more opinions so I could make my next application more advanced.
    and thanks *Advice :D
     

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