Hello,Before i start i would like to introduce myself[Skip the introduction if you want to read the app right away]
I am Abdelrahman,But most people just call me Jake .
I am seventeen years old.
Metal and Rock are my favorite music genres,But i also like pop,blues,jazz,anything with a guitar would definitely attract me .
Speaking of which , I am a guitarist I have been playing for a while now and own a Cort,probably the worst brand there is but i like it.
I have a band now its called False Avenue,Which Means False path or wrong Path.
My Favorite Actors Are Adam Sandler And Will Smith.
My moment is being on stage,I have been on stage 3 times so i know How it is to deal with stress.
I live in Egypt, However i speak English fluently in many accents.

Application

What is your In Game Name: SJAries/Slenderjake


What timezone do you live in: African Standard Time. [AST]


What Langues Do You Speak: [Arabic,English] Fluently And a Bit of Dutch



Have You Ever Been Banned,Why?: Once For Charge Backs,other than that i have been very respectful for the rules And Breaking them is not very Ideal.


Why do you think you should be a mod?:
1. Mature:I can be very mature at times,but not always.
But know that when there is duty there is always maturity.
2.Active:I Am Very Active[When i have the means of gaming,if i dont i spend my time on minechat and the fourms]
3.Experience:I have been on the server for a while so i know the rules very well.
4.Fast Typing :I am fast at typing,I can handle many messages at once.I also have 2 laptops so i can be focused on the Fourms and the game.
5.Leadership:Been a Assistant - leader at sporting sea scouts in Alexandria [ still am] Which helps me organize a lot of things such as events,parties,ETC
6.Helpful:I always help out in chat,Only when am building something,I still keep an eye on chat too.
7.Nationality:Being Arab, I can understand Arabic and deal with Arab people if there are any on the server.
8.Friendly:I am very friendly,Therefore it is very easy and in someway funny to talk to me
9.Love Of Work:I love what i do.
10.Know My Work:I know how to use log block and other Mod commands,I have Been a Mod Once.
11.Dedication:I am always dedicated to what i love.
12.Optimistic:You cant bring me down easily.
13. Patient: I am very patient and understanding.
14.Time Zone Advantage:I live in a different time zone.This will help with having mods all around the clock.
15.Trust Worthy:Most people trust me and i personally think that i am trustworthy.
16.Loyalty:I am very loyal to the community i love.




How Long Can You Be On The Server?: It depends,most days when i am using my laptop and my connection is not awful,I am online.
But Mostly 2 Hours Is my Least Record In a Day.
But Here Is a full schedule of my time:
Every Day From 2 pm To 6 Am.
Am Not Online the entire period,I log out and on every Once in while.
Still depends on if i have any plans.

School Days:Sadly In School days My Parents Only Let Me on for one hour And Its Not Decided. Basically Because School,I Do Need to focus On School Too.



Have you had any past experience as a mod? :
Yes I Have Been:
1.Admin On My Friends Server Until He Shut It Down.
2.Mod On Another Server,It Closed Due To The Lack Of Donations.


Final Note:All Love,Hate,Advice,Sarcasm,ETC Are Very Welcomed..Please Explain In Detail Why You Support,Don't Support me.
I don't have the best grammar,but i try to improve it.

 

Hmmmm, i see you online quite often and helping a little bit, you also need to really bulk up your app, put some colour, alot more information on why you should be a mod, what are you traits that will help you be a mod. 30% support, ill increase that when you are more active on forums, helping in game and on forums.

 

thank you,I Dont See Why i should add more colour, i think a simple 2 colour app would be fine for readers , more colours tire the eye mostly
as for the app it self I Will add more reasons yes
as for the fourms and active, i have just made my account like 20 mins ago, i will be active though

 

sorry, when i wrote the comment, there was no colour haha. Haha awesome man, be good to see you Mod.

 

Maybe touch up grammar and spelling.
Good luck.

 

Thank you I will fix my mistakes

 

75% Support,
You seem very open to suggestion and respect the rules. Just make sure to fix some of the color, bold out the questions, and add more detail!
Good Luck

Edit:
Support,
Your helping more and you added more detail and color.

 

Thank You I Will Take Care Of My App Soon

 

All feed back is appreciated

 

You've been helping alot more in-game and seeing you on the forums heaps! 75% support bro!

 

thank you

 

Support.
Thread advice:
• speak less loosely
•Stick to the format for applications and right the full question
• the bold is a bit overwhelming
Otherwise it was decent

 

thank you

thank you

 

added more info to the why should i become a mod section.

 

I'll give you partial support. You seem like an overall good person and you have been in the community for a while. However I don't know if you're ready.

Here are some things to help improve your app:

• Please stop with all the colors. It's discouraging and makes it annoying to read. All you need to do is distinguish the answers and questions to make it easier on the reader.
• Lower the font. Do what you want to make the application more presentable and pleasing to read but colors and font is bothersome.
• Being a good builder has nothing to do with being a mod.

Good luck

 

Remember,

Moderators do not get /gamemode!

The only reason that would help, is if Cyp or NoobCrew asked for an idea, but don't use "Good Builder" in your mod app,

Grammar should be checked,
Dark Colors,
Make it neater,
Thats all

 

I Will try to decrease the colours and the font thank you for your advice!

 

Made My App a bit more readable

 

Your application has too much colour. I feel like I'm forcing my eyes to read this; don't make it all blue.
I would recommend bolding the major questions and the answers to be of a smaller font and a different colour.

NB: Although colour doesn't matter much, it just makes it easier to read, and makes people not want to "skim" the application.

I do see you helping in game in public chat, but I would recommend helping in /msg instead. Especially when a moderator is online.

 

I dont really see what i should do about the colours everyone complains,when i change them.and as for helping, i do help in /msg sometimes and i do it in public too,i dont think it matters,as long as the aid is being given